Whewwwww

just watched a Michael 
Moore film & am still reeling
the things I don't want

to know but must I?
sweet relief to fall off in 
here and find some "more"

wackos but with a 
much different song to share
like a great escape

it makes me cry to 
read your comments and then to 
experience your 

experience far 
from the maddening 
lost sheep with lost voice
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 5:19 PM
btw, what country are you in? One that is NOT capitalisitic? i can see what you mean (in your comment to me!) LUv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 2:50 PM
Enjoyed reading your impressive poetry today Kristi. Have not read for almost a week now. I had a wonderful vacation. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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September 9, 2010 at 1:03 PM
Kristi, I'm wondering what comments made you cry. Hope it wasn't something said here at Poetry Soup. We all feel like wackos at times, singing our own unique songs. That last verse is very powerful! Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2010 at 8:31 PM
VERRRRRY interesting this haiku series! and I am left wondering. Which Michael Moore film was it? I think I have seen them all except for the last one on capitalism. LUv, Andrea
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