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Where's Our Future

Think about me
what do you see
is there a future for you and me
i try and i try
you just sit and cry
i guess im not the one
so with this gun
i put it to my head
one shot and im dead
id be just a bloody mess
should i
please say yes
things just aren’t the way they were before/
i don’t want to watch you cry anymore
say the word
and ill just be bloody and blurred
a memory nothing more
remember all we’ve been through
just obsessed with the thought of you
wanting you to love me too
i guess things just aren’t what they seemm
think about it this could all be a dream
you awaken
after all dear
there was nothing to fear
i love you
you love me too

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/1/2011 5:07:00 AM
Wow, what a rollercoaster ride that one is, I think you've empathised with the characters very well, kept the emotions quite raw as they would indeed be. enjoyed the read.
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