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Bedroom

where you used to be

the ceiling fan spins
a quiet breeze fills the space
where you used to be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 12:25 PM
What a lovely yet sad read. A great picture. "Good Luck" If for a contest.  Have a blessed day/week writing away...........
Achara Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 12:39 PM
Thank you.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 2:33 PM
appreciate the poignancy. well executed
Achara Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 12:39 PM
Thank you.
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