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Where Will My Heart Take You Today

Where will my heart take you today If you open the door ? It would take you to places , and beautiful faces , you've never seen before. Because there is magic if you believe ,there is a paradise, You do not have to travel the world ,to see such beauty that brightens the eyes. It is right there , in front of you , Listen to my soul .. It is a soul that speaks the truth ,Get hold of it, Never let go ... Cherish the flashes of this short life, Count hundred ways to smile When shapeless clouds cover the sun , Fly higher than the sky. Where will my heart take you today if you open the door ? 'Bove gentle ripples where boats move slow, under a moonlit glow. Amidst the scents of flowered trees which waft in the slight breeze , That rise ' bove high close to the stars ,then flow so softly into new dreams . Where will my heart take you today if you open the door ? It pulls you deep into my arms to the melt water of polar snow , to louvered windows'filtering thoughts ,to a surprise that will go on. Where will this heart take me today , If I open my door It takes me to streets , where my passion bleeds Where this joy I feel ,moves in rhytmic beats to the ones tthat I greet , to the ones I adore .

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Robert Lindley

Date: 9/21/2015 10:08:00 PM

Follow your heart and it will take you to paradise and back. However, one must let the brain in on the ride too. You did both extremely well, a gem of a poem was born my friend! A7..

Paul Callus

Date: 7/26/2015 4:34:00 AM

I love the sound of rippling words and the gentle feel of this poem, Charm. Opening that door is also opening the mind to a world of fantasy where passion and love can flow unrestrained. ~ Have a lovely day! // paul

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 7/17/2015 6:19:00 PM

Hey, Charmaine. Great question and you used it very effectively throughout the poem in different ways. I like that; real original.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/16/2015 3:49:00 PM

I like the new Avatar, you also look good as a blonde.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/15/2015 8:18:00 AM

Good morning Charmaine.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/14/2015 8:00:00 PM

I see you have a hit on your hands, this is tremendous Charmaine.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/13/2015 10:10:00 PM

simply beautiful Charmaine

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2015 10:31:00 PM

another impassioned poem of delight from you, Charma. Nice seeing this new poem of yours tonight.

Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 7/11/2015 12:43:00 AM

This is 4 U also dear friend. Never mind if you were singing long back. Just try your lyrics yourself. In the beginning use Power Point. Open PP and go to its Sound option given in the last of right side. Use the Recording option by using a simple Microphone and make practice as many time as you can. You can replay these sounds in Power Point to bring the best results. Hope U 2 can do it.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/10/2015 4:21:00 PM

who doesn't adore a gentleman.. finely written, charms.. huggs

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 7/10/2015 1:29:00 PM

What a beauty you have created in this lovely sweet Song. "Listen to my soul .. It is a soul that speaks the truth, Get hold of it, Never let go...Cherish the flashes of this short life, Count hundred ways to smile, When shapeless clouds cover the sun, Fly higher than the sky." Sorry because of internet persisting problems in the area where I am staying currently I could visit your page so late. It's a beautiful Song. My Good Wishes for your Song. Do You Sing Songs? L&BW..Ravindra K Kapoor

Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 7/11/2015 12:40:00 AM

Never mind if you were singing long back. Just try your lyrics yourself. In the beginning use Power Point. Open PP and go to its Sound option given in the last of right side. Use the Recording option by using a simple Microphone and make practice as many time as you can. You can replay these sounds in Power Point to bring the best results. I am hopeful you can do it. L&BW. Ravindra K Kapoor

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/10/2015 2:30:00 PM

Thanks so much : ), The only places I used to sing was in church choirs and school choirs and that is about twenty-two years ago. I just write lyrics,just for the feel of it,but yes when I'm writing a lyric, I need to feel the music,tnks again.

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/10/2015 11:28:00 AM

Truly a wonderful poem, written with such elegance...

Allen Danie

Date: 7/10/2015 1:59:00 AM

It is indeed a piteous poem...nice work Charmaine A~D

Lebogang Monyela

Date: 7/9/2015 7:45:00 AM

Sooo touching...! :') Nice writing Charmain

James Peranteau

Date: 7/9/2015 6:05:00 AM

Hello my dear poet ! So happy to see that your fight in write persist my friend ! It's a steady beautiful rain right now, I must shortly go out and enjoy it...I pray all is well with you and your new beautiful ! Have a blessed week....much love, james

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/8/2015 6:28:00 AM

- A beautiful poem, Charmaine - Always have your heart door open - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 7/7/2015 6:07:00 PM

Simply beautiful Charma...If I open that door I will find joy in every breath I breathe, in every step I take, every sight I see....I will find a heart that needs to be loved and arms that need to be held....a perfect 7 and favorite..... Tim

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/7/2015 5:45:00 PM

Where will your heart take you..to these beautiful words and warm hugs to you ;)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/7/2015 5:01:00 PM

lovely romantic lyrics with beautiful imagery Charma:-) hugs jan xx 7 xx