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Where We Are All Headed

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every day we scurry at our hurried pace
simply another runner in the human race

no time to reach out and make any real connection
to show those in our circle meaningful affection

one thing for sure each one of us cannot escape
one day we’ll watch our life on a celestial audiotape

we shouldn’t wait till we’re on a gurney
to think about sum total of our journey

reconsider terrestrial bickering and strife
over points that matter least in afterlife

today is not too late to make amends
to set scores straight and start new trends



AP: 3rd place 2021

Submitted on April 3, 2021 for contest WHERE ARE WE HEADED sponsored by UNSEEKING SEEKER  -  RANKED 7TH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 4/23/2021 9:13:00 PM
Line, thank you for sharing your inspirations and your placement. Look forward to your participation in the next contest ‘Our last thoughts’
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/24/2021 9:08:00 PM
Thank you so much ~ love your inspirations.
Date: 4/9/2021 12:26:00 PM
You speak my thoughts and your poem is the absolute truth in verse! Great poem! All the best in the competition.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/9/2021 2:39:00 PM
Thank you, Krish ~
Date: 4/5/2021 11:57:00 AM
Absolutely true and correct, it is when we lose someone cherished that we think, oh for just a moment back in life to tell them what they meant to us, and let all petty disagreements be forgotten, just thank God that he brought us together. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/5/2021 1:23:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely comment, Jennifer ~
Date: 4/3/2021 7:30:00 PM
So true, Line, and excellent advice. I tend to think we'll enter a spiritual world where we are not restricted and where we can fly like spirits are supposed to. Who knows? Your thoughts are very interesting. Your rhymes are excellent.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/3/2021 8:39:00 PM
Thank you very much, Milton ~
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