Where We Are All Headed

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every day we scurry at our hurried pace simply another runner in the human race no time to reach out and make any real connection to show those in our circle meaningful affection one thing for sure each one of us cannot escape one day we’ll watch our life on a celestial audiotape we shouldn’t wait till we’re on a gurney to think about sum total of our journey reconsider terrestrial bickering and strife over points that matter least in afterlife today is not too late to make amends to set scores straight and start new trends AP: 3rd place 2021 Submitted on April 3, 2021 for contest WHERE ARE WE HEADED sponsored by UNSEEKING SEEKER - RANKED 7TH

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 4/23/2021 9:13:00 PM

Line, thank you for sharing your inspirations and your placement. Look forward to your participation in the next contest ‘Our last thoughts’

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/24/2021 9:08:00 PM

Thank you so much ~ love your inspirations.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 4/9/2021 12:26:00 PM

You speak my thoughts and your poem is the absolute truth in verse! Great poem! All the best in the competition.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/9/2021 2:39:00 PM

Thank you, Krish ~

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/5/2021 11:57:00 AM

Absolutely true and correct, it is when we lose someone cherished that we think, oh for just a moment back in life to tell them what they meant to us, and let all petty disagreements be forgotten, just thank God that he brought us together. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/5/2021 1:23:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely comment, Jennifer ~

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/3/2021 7:30:00 PM

So true, Line, and excellent advice. I tend to think we'll enter a spiritual world where we are not restricted and where we can fly like spirits are supposed to. Who knows? Your thoughts are very interesting. Your rhymes are excellent.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/3/2021 8:39:00 PM

Thank you very much, Milton ~