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Poem written for and submitted to "I Do Not Know" poetry contest, Hilo Poet, sponsor, October 21, 2025

WHERE THE VEIL THINS

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Not in shrine’s cold marble, nor studio’s frantic clutter— but in breath suspended between midnight and dawn, when mind sheds its armor and soul forgets its name. There: a flicker in the silence, a pulse beneath the static— raw, jumbled words awaiting hands that know they are guided.
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November 3, 2025 at 12:25 PM
Exquisite reflections linger in this poem, dear Sara. The topic you have selected bears significance and relevance, resonating with the currents of thought that shape our understanding. Hearty congratulations on your win in the contest.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 12:22 PM
Mesmerizing rendition, personified on nearly every line, love it, with my compliments and FAVE, Aloha, William.
Gauthier Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 8:21 PM
Beautifully crafted brevity ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 5:24 AM
many thanks, dear Line.
Hind Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 11:48 AM
Sometimes I feel like that, too. Inspiring <3
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October 23, 2025 at 5:22 AM
thanks for sharing...hugs, Sara
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