Where the Lemon Trees Flower

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Where The Lemon Trees Flower


I know the land where the lemon trees flower,
   with citrus scents that often overpower
      those of the rose or sweet-perfumed wildflower
that grow around the old Sicilian tower.
     
Here, hand in hand, close to the midnight hour,
   we walk the trails where full-moon does empower
      young lovers seek their own romantic bower,
while soulful bells ring out from the watchtower.
    
We soon take shelter from a thundershower;
   'tween lightning bolts, it booms its mighty power.
      In loving arms, I'm safe with brave manpower
that holds me close within love's superpower.

Anon, our kisses weaken love's willpower,
   so back we head to our Sicilian tower,
      where lemon scents are sweet and never sour...
and love and lemon-trees together flower.


Sandra M. Haight

~5th Place~
Premiere Contest: August 2018
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: August 8, 2018

~8th Place~
Premiere Contest: Pretty Poem Please
Sponsor: Julia Ward
Judged: 08/02/2018

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Date: 8/10/2018 4:24:00 PM
Back again to congratulate you again on your win again. Beautiful romantic imagery.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/12/2018 8:54:00 AM
Thank you again, Susan! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/9/2018 9:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem, Sandra - blessings and best wishes for more! This is just lovely! :-) <3
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/12/2018 8:52:00 AM
Thank you again, Greg, for your visit and very supportive congrats and comment! I appreciate them so much. Sandra
Date: 8/8/2018 9:27:00 AM
And I smell those Sicilian lemon trees. Lovely, Sandra. Congrats on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/12/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thank you very much, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/2/2018 10:19:00 AM
I enjoyed the many romantic themes in your poem, the lovers heading off to their Sicilian tower being prominent in these. Congratulations on your win in my contest, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/2/2018 1:56:00 PM
Julia, thank you once again for another inspiring contest. I enjoyed working on my poem, and I appreciate my nice placement on your winning list! Sandra
Date: 8/2/2018 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this sweet love poem. SuZ
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/2/2018 1:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, SuZ! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/2/2018 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/2/2018 3:57:00 PM
Thank you very much, Susan! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/2/2018 4:38:00 AM
A lovely romantic delight! Congrats, Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/2/2018 1:57:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/2/2018 3:42:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your great win with such a beautifully flowing lyric.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/2/2018 1:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, Subimal! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/27/2018 9:29:00 AM
You write beautifully, Sandra.. this has "win" all over it!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/27/2018 8:59:00 PM
Oh, you are too kind, LM! Thank you so much for the very uplifting comments! Sandra :)
Date: 7/26/2018 4:49:00 PM
WoW Sandra: Your monorhyme is outstanding. Sure to place high. SuZ
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/27/2018 8:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, Suzanne, for your visit and lovely comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/26/2018 3:41:00 PM
OUtstanding work for this challenge, Sandra!!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/27/2018 8:56:00 PM
Thank you for your supportive comment, Andrea. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/26/2018 1:39:00 PM
Great entry Sandra, best wishes...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/27/2018 8:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, Charlie! Much appreciated! Sandra
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