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Where the Lemon Trees Flower


Where The Lemon Trees Flower


I know the land where the lemon trees flower,
   with citrus scents that often overpower
      those of the rose or sweet-perfumed wildflower
that grow around the old Sicilian tower.
     
Here, hand in hand, close to the midnight hour,
   we walk the trails where full-moon does empower
      young lovers seek their own romantic bower,
while soulful bells ring out from the watchtower.
    
We soon take shelter from a thundershower;
   'tween lightning bolts, it booms its mighty power.
      In loving arms, I'm safe with brave manpower
that holds me close within love's superpower.

Anon, our kisses weaken love's willpower,
   so back we head to our Sicilian tower,
      where lemon scents are sweet and never sour...
and love and lemon-trees together flower.


Sandra M. Haight

~5th Place~
Premiere Contest: August 2018
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: August 8, 2018

~8th Place~
Premiere Contest: Pretty Poem Please
Sponsor: Julia Ward
Judged: 08/02/2018
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Gentry Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 4:24 PM
Back again to congratulate you again on your win again. Beautiful romantic imagery.
Haight Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 8:54 AM
Thank you again, Susan! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Barden Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 9:04 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem, Sandra - blessings and best wishes for more! This is just lovely! :-) <3
Haight Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 8:52 AM
Thank you again, Greg, for your visit and very supportive congrats and comment! I appreciate them so much. Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 9:27 AM
And I smell those Sicilian lemon trees. Lovely, Sandra. Congrats on your win.
Haight Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Thank you very much, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Ward Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 10:19 AM
I enjoyed the many romantic themes in your poem, the lovers heading off to their Sicilian tower being prominent in these. Congratulations on your win in my contest, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Julia, thank you once again for another inspiring contest. I enjoyed working on my poem, and I appreciate my nice placement on your winning list! Sandra
Delaney Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 6:17 AM
Congratulations on your win with this sweet love poem. SuZ
Haight Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Thank you very much, SuZ! Hugs, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations on your win. :)
Haight Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 3:57 PM
Thank you very much, Susan! Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 4:38 AM
A lovely romantic delight! Congrats, Sandra!
Haight Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 1:57 PM
Thank you very much, Kim! Hugs, Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 3:42 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your great win with such a beautifully flowing lyric.
Haight Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 1:57 PM
Thank you so much, Subimal! Hugs, Sandra
Man Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 9:29 AM
You write beautifully, Sandra.. this has "win" all over it!
Haight Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 8:59 PM
Oh, you are too kind, LM! Thank you so much for the very uplifting comments! Sandra :)
Delaney Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 4:49 PM
WoW Sandra: Your monorhyme is outstanding. Sure to place high. SuZ
Haight Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 8:57 PM
Thank you so much, Suzanne, for your visit and lovely comments! Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 3:41 PM
OUtstanding work for this challenge, Sandra!!
Haight Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 8:56 PM
Thank you for your supportive comment, Andrea. Hugs, Sandra
Smith Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 1:39 PM
Great entry Sandra, best wishes...
Haight Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 8:56 PM
Thank you very much, Charlie! Much appreciated! Sandra
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