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Where the Foxes Wander

Where the Foxes Wander Through the mist of dandelion seeds That float across the dew filled field The dancing seeds part majestically The grass bends the stalks do yield His nose in the air, Between the mist of seeds Eyes darting left and right Taking in the field of weeds Stepping forward cautiously One step in front of the other Its then another fox appears A vixen with cubs - a mother. The fox runs forward not looking back The mother nips at the cubs They lie still, hidden they think The fox returns and noses rub. He leads the way through open space Fox, vixen, and offspring To the chicken run next door But should I do anything? The large brown hens pecking dirt The fox his eye on one The cockerel then starts to crow The sly fox is now undone. © GG 17/06/2013

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Date: 11/7/2013 8:45:00 AM
well crafted poem Mandy......with a great last line...hugs
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Date: 7/30/2013 12:07:00 AM
Mandy, this is a great little scene you have created here with this poem. I am glad I tracked down a fairly recent one of yours that I had not seen yet.
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Date: 6/21/2013 4:32:00 AM
A family, with mouths to feed, always gets my support. Chickens beware... The foxes are hungry... Great writing, Mandy.... Jake
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Date: 6/18/2013 3:53:00 AM
I was there Mandy your imagery is spot on for the fox fine pen Shadow x smile
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Date: 6/17/2013 3:27:00 PM
very visual, you write these ever so well,
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Date: 6/17/2013 9:01:00 AM
Love the setting here! You're quite an atmospheric poet. Excellent!
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