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Where Once Played a Violin

it began with sweet violins we drank champagne on ice summer days spent dancing in a place called paradise you held me close at night we talked about everything someday we'd tie the knot and I would wear your ring until dark clouds found us and cold rain began to fall what once was happiness fled in a black raven's call our dreams fell from a tree leaves upon autumn's wind hearts like empty branches stripped bare in the bitter end if you listen very carefully you can hear winter begin sounds of impending snow where once played a violin

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Date: 1/6/2022 1:35:00 PM
Breathtaking ! With your imagery and flow of verse I can hear the strains of violins.....Lovely! :) Paulette
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John Gilman
Date: 1/6/2022 3:26:00 PM
Aww...thank you so much, P! I'm super pleased that you liked it!
Date: 1/6/2022 11:42:00 AM
Hello John Gilman, This is a beautiful poem. The violin plays a very sad song. Yet I do enjoy the sound of the violin. John also my fav. to. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/7/2022 10:15:00 AM
Hello John, you are welcome. I am going to read it again. Enjoy your day my friend.
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John Gilman
Date: 1/6/2022 3:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, DDB! I'm tickled that you liked it. I greatly appreciate your kind words!
Date: 1/6/2022 6:45:00 AM
John all I can say is beautiful, beautiful beautiful! Truly beautiful poem that so touched my heart! Thankyou Debx
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John Gilman
Date: 1/6/2022 8:43:00 AM
Aww...thank you, DM! It's a fav of mine too. I had forgotten about it and stumbled upon it earlier today. I'm super, super pleased that you liked it!

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