Timothy Mcguire Poet Rhyme

Where My Fathers Abide

Wind whispered and chilled my soul
Said it was time to go
Over the great divide
Back to where my fathers abide

Where souls wait for those who come
To where time begun
Wind whispered and we fly
Back to where my fathers abide

To the land of wind and shadow
Wind whispered it was time to go
With the souls of times gone by
Back to where my fathers abide

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Kelly Deschler January 8, 2020 at 6:21 PM Beautifully written and I like your use of repetition in this poem... Keep up the wonderful writing Timothy! Timothy Mcguire January 9, 2020 at 12:23 AM Thank you Kelly for your kind words and encouragement.

Lindsay Laurie January 8, 2020 at 4:38 PM G'day Timothy … generational roots can be so entrenched that wherever we are, can feel the spirits calling us home - thanks Timothy - Lindsay Timothy Mcguire January 9, 2020 at 12:23 AM We will be high kinsmen someday

Line Gauthier January 8, 2020 at 1:13 AM Beautiful poem, Timothy. Timothy Mcguire January 8, 2020 at 3:10 PM thank you miss Line