Where I Would Be

IF you could close your eyes and click your heels where would you be?
With the breeze in my hair while the sun shines brightly. Echos of waterfalls can be heard in the far off distance. Not a person to be found for hundreds of miles around. The sounds the waves make coming in and going out. Provides a relaxation and peacefulness the soul needs to hang on. Birds sign their songs for the world to hear. As I sit writing for all to read. There’s no other place I’d rather be than sitting on a beach in the tropical lands, is where you’d find me.
Cory long Click your heels contest 8-27-2011
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Brown Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 7:58 AM
Congratulations on your placement Cory. Love, Carol
M V Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations!Sweet write,Cory
Minardi Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 10:04 AM
Congrats, Cory!!! I loved this poem, told ya! :)
Song Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 7:15 AM
Amen brother,.,,,...right there with ya! But with a huge bottle of bug spray and air-conditioned hut! Congrats on creating a relaxing scene with this entry...it was a brief Calgon bath moment for this audience member. Gwendolen
Williams Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 3:54 AM
hey Cory congrats on your win..David
Ramsdale Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 3:02 AM
A Sixth Place Win Congratulations. CR
Quigley Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 12:17 AM
Congratulations on your win Cory.
Villanueva Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 10:33 PM
a scene of quiescence ~~~CONGRATULATIONS~~~*-* jun-jun
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September 2, 2011 at 7:24 PM
You painted a beautiful scene here... Congrats my dear friend.... And yes long week after Irene.... almos done with manuscript...getting excited!! luv Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 7:10 PM
super congrats cory on a fantastic win with this wonderful write my friend and buddy.. enjoy as much as u are enjoying the birthday party for little one ..luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 2:39 PM
move over cory ..I will join u my friend for this beach and place sound fascinating luv.. good luck in the contest.. much inspiration as I have been on the beach every day except for two days of rain.here in Florida..
Long Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 9:34 PM
any time, we would have a blast linda marie
Mehta Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 3:00 PM
Wonderful write for the contest, cory
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