Where Have You Gone, My Love

Where have you gone?
I am lonely and forlorn
We swore of not parting ever
You've vanished in a wink, what’s the matter?

We promised to be together in rain and sunshine
The sun and moon be eclipsed but you’ll be mine
We are made for each other, you said
You brought me the gift of roses red

Where are those promises, where are those days?
The games in moonlight and seashore plays
The sky of my life is now overcast
I am bewildered, I am aghast

Lost are those whispers, lost are those songs
The replay of past moments my crying heart longs
My happiness has withered, my joys are gone
My heart is a desert where thorns have grown

Sintra, Portugal 22/01/ 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/18/2016 11:22:00 AM
Hamida, I would love to read more poems from you. :) If you find time to post again. Please let me know, It will be a delight to come back and read more of your poems. Love SKAT
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Hamida Yamin
Date: 1/20/2016 7:50:00 AM
Thanks Skat A. you are very kind. Surely I will inform you when I post my new poem
Date: 2/22/2015 6:02:00 PM
hamida, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Hamida Yamin
Date: 4/28/2015 4:13:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words PD
Date: 2/22/2015 2:52:00 PM
Hello Hamida, once again....CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win, enjoy the coming week **SKAT**
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Hamida Yamin
Date: 4/28/2015 4:14:00 PM
Thanks for your kind message Skat A
Date: 2/21/2015 12:01:00 AM
Hamida, epic poem **SKAT LOVE**
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Hamida Yamin
Date: 4/28/2015 4:16:00 PM
Thanks Skat A
Date: 2/7/2015 1:03:00 PM
I choose not to forget past lovers, instead I am thankful for what they have taught me. Thankfully I have had 22 years with the woman of my dreams and their lessons taught me to appreciate her fully. Thanks for your thought provoking and heartfelt piece.
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Hamida Yamin
Date: 2/15/2015 1:36:00 AM
Thank s for relating with my poem. Sorry if it aroused sad memories. GOD BLESS YOU.
Date: 1/23/2015 12:14:00 PM
I can definitely relate to this on so many levels, went through this with my ex and hope i never experience it again, Actually drew out a tear from me. Great write saving it as a fav.
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Hamida Yamin
Date: 1/23/2015 4:04:00 PM
THanks for visiting my poem. I am glad my poem has an appeal to you. I am sad to know that the poem has revived old memories that you wanted to forget. God bless you.
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