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Where Echoes Hide

There's a place in my heart where sunlight never shines. A place so lost and forgotten that no one ever finds. It's so empty and dark there are shadows on all sides. Deep inside this cavern is the place where echoes hide. There are cobwebs all around and decay everywhere. Leading into the dark is a dangerous steep stair. If you find yourself at the bottom where shadows glide. You'll find yourself in a corner of hell where echoes hide. If there's ever a time you are there don't stay long. You may hear a sound much like a devil's song. When this sound seems to come from deep inside. You've become one of the shadows where echoes hide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/28/2016 9:54:00 PM
Scott, Congrats on your Screwed X win. LINDA
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Scott Williams
Date: 1/29/2016 6:35:00 AM
Thank you Linda. I really appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Date: 1/22/2016 1:59:00 AM
Wonder why it got screwed up earlier.. congrats on big win Scott..
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Date: 1/22/2016 8:06:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Your feedback means a great deal to me.
Date: 1/20/2016 8:29:00 AM
Scott, Congrats on your win. SKAT **
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Scott Williams
Date: 1/22/2016 8:04:00 AM
Thank you very much, SKAT
Date: 1/18/2016 9:34:00 AM
Exceptional poetry. I've heard those echoes, and walk that path myself, long ago. Solid 7 for this fine write.. A7
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Date: 1/18/2016 9:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robert. I really appreciate your feedback on my writing. I'm glad you managed to find your way out of the dark. Its not a fun place to be.
Date: 12/18/2015 10:11:00 AM
Deep write Scott, this is what I call poetry. Your words harvest a heavy heart, sad to see it's been dimmed from any light. A perfect 7 poem. SKAT
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Scott Williams
Date: 12/19/2015 1:12:00 AM
Thank you, SKAT. It seems like the dark ones are always my best.