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Where Echoes Hide

Where Echoes Hide I once asked my mother where echoes hide She turned from the sink and quietly cried. "I know naught of echoes," her whispered reply. "When I scream in the dark, no one answers my cry." I once asked my father where echoes hide He got his mean look like when being defied. "Don't ask such things, it’s your mother I hear! Now go tell that cow to bring me a beer." I asked a close friend where echoes hide "In the arms of a lover." But I found out she lied. I once asked my lover where echoes hide He laughed and then beat me ‘til I bleeded inside. I finally asked God where echoes hide As I jumped off a cliff praying only I died. "God do you hear?" It was then that I knew As He answered, "Hear, here.” And I finally flew. 12/10/2015

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Date: 1/18/2021 10:13:00 PM
own echo is hidden in itself!
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Date: 1/18/2021 1:17:00 PM
Keep the creative pen flowing!
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Date: 1/17/2021 2:26:00 PM
Creative work. I see why a person who lived in these circumstances would want to jump off a cliff but that is definitely not the answer. Congrats on this emotive and expressive work being featured on Home Page on soup. Sara
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Date: 7/30/2016 8:46:00 PM
Cindi, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest --- 101 in a row. :) Stop by my blog "They Hang Horses, Don't They?" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/14/2016 11:33:00 AM
Hi Cindi, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.
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Date: 3/13/2016 11:19:00 AM
congrats on your win
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Date: 3/13/2016 10:35:00 AM
Cindi, Congratulations on your win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "Names on Poetry Soup" if you like. It would be nice to hear from you and all those who I honored with a placement. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/10/2015 2:09:00 PM
wow great poem!
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 12/10/2015 2:12:00 PM
Thank you!

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