Where Echoes Hide

Where Echoes Hide

I once asked my mother where echoes hide
She turned from the sink and quietly cried.

"I know naught of echoes," her whispered reply.
"When I scream in the dark, no one answers my cry."

I once asked my father where echoes hide
He got his mean look like when being defied.

"Don't ask such things, it’s your mother I hear!
Now go tell that cow to bring me a beer."

I asked a close friend where echoes hide
"In the arms of a lover." But I found out she lied.

I once asked my lover where echoes hide
He laughed and then beat me ‘til I bleeded inside.

I finally asked God where echoes hide
As I jumped off a cliff praying only I died.

"God do you hear?" It was then that I knew
As He answered, "Hear, here.” And I finally flew.

12/10/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bangalee Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 10:13 PM
own echo is hidden in itself!
Mills  Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 1:17 PM
Keep the creative pen flowing!
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 2:26 PM
Creative work. I see why a person who lived in these circumstances would want to jump off a cliff but that is definitely not the answer. Congrats on this emotive and expressive work being featured on Home Page on soup. Sara
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July 30, 2016 at 8:46 PM
Cindi, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest --- 101 in a row. :) Stop by my blog "They Hang Horses, Don't They?" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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March 14, 2016 at 11:33 AM
Hi Cindi, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.
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March 13, 2016 at 11:19 AM
congrats on your win
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March 13, 2016 at 10:35 AM
Cindi, Congratulations on your win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "Names on Poetry Soup" if you like. It would be nice to hear from you and all those who I honored with a placement. XOX ~LINDA~
Family Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 2:09 PM
wow great poem!
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December 10, 2015 at 2:12 PM
Thank you!
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