Where Eagles Dare - Tb

Where Eagles Dare - TB

Eaglets ace sky
first, defy plunge,
scrape by skirt dirt.

2020 November 25
*3rd Place*
Than-Bauk Me
~~Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Allison Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 2:36 PM
a fine entry William, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 2:39 PM
Thank you, Jan, for your visits are welcoming, Aloha!
Kauffman Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 9:09 PM
Wonderful imagery, William. And most people don't know that baby birds learn to fly by dropping out of the nest. Very original. Congratulations! Aloha!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 9:32 PM
Your insights are 'SPOT ON', Sam, for I can always count on you to uplifting my heart my friend, ALOHA!
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 3:53 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest. Sara
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 9:00 AM
Thank you, Sara, appreciate it, Aloha!
Roper Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 8:42 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 8:44 PM
Thank you, Eve, appreciate it, Aloha!
Y. Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 2:41 PM
Hi William, Great job with the chosen form. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-)Alexis
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 6:37 PM
Thank you, Alexis, and to you as well, Aloha!
Messina Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 1:21 PM
Well done, William. Nice entry for my contest. Congratulations on your win. Stay well and safe.. All the best, Charlie
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 1:24 PM
Thanks, Charlie, for another opportunity, and to you as well, Aloha!
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 6:40 PM
WELL DONE with this brief form, William. I love the rhyming words you chose.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 9:40 PM
Your words warmed me up, Andrea, on this 'rare' nippy Hawaiian eve my friend, Aloha!
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