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Where Eagles Dare - Tb

Where Eagles Dare - TB

Eaglets ace sky
first, defy plunge,
scrape by skirt dirt.

2020 November 25
*3rd Place*
Than-Bauk Me
~~Charles Messina

Copyright © William Kelii Kekaula | Year Posted 2020

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December 7, 2020 at 2:36 PM

a fine entry William, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

William Kelii Kekaula

December 7, 2020 at 2:39 PM

Thank you, Jan, for your visits are welcoming, Aloha!

December 5, 2020 at 9:09 PM

Wonderful imagery, William. And most people don't know that baby birds learn to fly by dropping out of the nest. Very original. Congratulations! Aloha!

William Kelii Kekaula

December 5, 2020 at 9:32 PM

Your insights are 'SPOT ON', Sam, for I can always count on you to uplifting my heart my friend, ALOHA!

December 5, 2020 at 3:53 AM

Congrats on your placement in the contest. Sara

William Kelii Kekaula

December 5, 2020 at 9:00 AM

Thank you, Sara, appreciate it, Aloha!

December 4, 2020 at 8:42 PM

Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve

William Kelii Kekaula

December 4, 2020 at 8:44 PM

Thank you, Eve, appreciate it, Aloha!

December 4, 2020 at 2:41 PM

Hi William, Great job with the chosen form. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-)Alexis

William Kelii Kekaula

December 4, 2020 at 6:37 PM

Thank you, Alexis, and to you as well, Aloha!

Charles Messina

December 4, 2020 at 1:21 PM

Well done, William. Nice entry for my contest. Congratulations on your win. Stay well and safe.. All the best, Charlie

William Kelii Kekaula

December 4, 2020 at 1:24 PM

Thanks, Charlie, for another opportunity, and to you as well, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

November 27, 2020 at 6:40 PM

WELL DONE with this brief form, William. I love the rhyming words you chose.

William Kelii Kekaula

November 27, 2020 at 9:40 PM

Your words warmed me up, Andrea, on this 'rare' nippy Hawaiian eve my friend, Aloha!

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