Where does one start on eternity

When I die, where will I be?
Where does one start on eternity?
At the beginning? Or more to the middle?
Or perhaps, left of forever a little?
Or at the intersection betwixt and between
the pre~ and the post-me?
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March 1, 2025 at 5:43 PM
Your poem has a whimsical yet profound approach to the concept of eternity and the afterlife. The questioning tone makes it feel introspective, while the playful phrasing--like “left of forever a little” and “betwixt and between”--adds a light, almost mischievous touch to an otherwise deep subject.
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