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Where Do We Go To

When we are asleep
do we float or stay in bed?
Shall we meet in dreams?

I wake up travelled
My mind shuts down to my room
I go away to...

                         Somewhere I used to know

dreamintrospectionhaiku

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Kyle Maples

March 11, 2013 at 8:32 PM

Like the concept!

Timothy Hicks

March 8, 2013 at 7:50 PM

This is a cool piece of nostalgia. I thought the way you spaced the last line really emphasized the separation between past and present. Though I don't think this is technically a haiku, maybe a mondo? A mondo is a poem of two three line stanzas. The first asks a question and then second answers it in a unique way... this seems to me to be what you're doing here. Creative and cool... enjoyed!