Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Where Do Dreams Go

Where do dreams go
upon their very death
Tell me should I know
Will it take away my breath

Need to know when dreams die
do they have a special place
Surely they must qualify
Or are they just erased

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Sandra Adams September 27, 2019 at 10:25 AM i often can't remember dreams, always say i don't have any, would love to know where they go through...good one :) hugs

Gershon Wolf September 24, 2019 at 3:51 PM Wow. I just love this. One can think about this topic all day. You've raised with just the right poetic touch. 8 lines - Perfect. Right into my FAVES, Brenda. Thanks, Gershon Brenda Chiri September 24, 2019 at 4:27 PM Thank you once again Gershon! A question that may never have an answer! But still was fun to ask!;)

Ann Foster September 24, 2019 at 8:50 AM I think they live in another place...forever...dreaming dreams about dreams... hugs. Ann Brenda Chiri September 24, 2019 at 2:03 PM Thank you Ann! That sounds like s sweet place!;)

Tom Cunningham September 24, 2019 at 8:29 AM Good question Brenda, I think they get stored somewhere in your sub conscious mind. Tom Brenda Chiri September 24, 2019 at 8:41 AM Thank you Tom! You and victor seems to know all about dreams!;)

Chris Green September 24, 2019 at 6:53 AM Good questions that I wish I knew the answers to. This was very creative in thought and idea Brenda. Really cool. Brenda Chiri September 24, 2019 at 8:40 AM Thank you so much chris!;)