Where Did We Go Wrong

Where did we go wrong

what happen to the love we had 
why must it be this way fussing and fighting 
Where did we go wrong
was our love so perfect that it had to be tainted
Where did we go wrong
did it need flaws to be perfect
Where did we go wrong
i was good to you what happen 
where did we go wrong 
i found love in you and you found love me 
Where did we go wrong
was my love so loud that i could not here you cry 
Where did we go wrong
when you cry your hart becomes weak for that 
person move in. 
Where did we go wrong
people ask me why do you love her 
she made me fill good about my self she lift my sprits 
she made me fill like a man.
Where did we go wrong
maybe my love was so blinding i could not see what was going on
Where did we go wrong
Where did i go wrong
Where did we go wrong
Where did i go wrong
did i not love you enough 
Where did i go wrong
did i not be there for you
Where did i go wrong
did i not care for you 
Where did i go wrong
twenty years gone by
Where did i go wrong
i never cheated 
Where did i go wrong
i always been faithful 
Where did i go wrong

            Where did we go wrong?



                                         By reginald conyers 
    My frist poem

Fin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 10/7/2010 7:56:00 AM
wow how nice very good first poem enjoyed faleshia
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Date: 10/5/2010 9:56:00 AM
A pleasure to read your poetry today Reginald. I wish you the best in your endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2010 8:40:00 PM
"was my love so loud that i could not hear you cry" that is a great line among a beautiful first poem! keep it up
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Date: 10/4/2010 5:17:00 PM
Very passionate write on the feelings of love, Reginald
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Date: 10/4/2010 3:22:00 PM
Sorry about the love loss in your life..Sometimes it is hard to trace it back to where the problems started..Hope through your writing that you find what the problems were..Sara
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