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you did not Cupid shoot an arrow and as if planned hit the bull's eye of my heart you didn't use curare or any poisonous frog's blood to drug or make me fall in love but now my heart burns with an ache that no remedy can take you away or ease relief of acid not a flash back but like anti acid in an opposite world where Antacid Man is a super hero that can do everything i wouldn't do such as moving and removing twisting and turning that which wasn't shot in his heart but his foot instead puncturing him to mistakingly not punctuate "What's this thing called love?" but "What's this thing called love?" never knowing what i know in my opposite universe

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Date: 9/19/2019 9:00:00 PM
I like this. Reading you tonight, each piece a little rabbit hole. Spelunked.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/20/2019 9:21:00 AM
Is now. ;D,
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/20/2019 9:03:00 AM
Hahaha Maureen thank you. Is "White Rabbit" playing in your head?

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