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Where Are You

I saw you standing over there, As I just turned around, but then I saw none, And heard no sound I saw a stranger at your place, The rock if you ask me To describe the state Promised to never lose me, And you yourself got lost, What a strange scenario it is, I tried my best to search you within the frost Got to tell you so many things, Got to know from you That why a stranger holding your place, Where are you? Distances broadened, Communication narrowed, But I lost the gem, The pain I swallowed Is it too far where you went? Can’t you come just for a while? I will not let you go again, I will Not let that smile to fade Light years away are you? Or the stars are your curtains? Never knew I felt so strong About you, where are you? Accusations,allegations,mistrust, Hopelessness, These are the words I use for the stranger, The stranger is frozen from inside, Not at all like you, Why you made him to act like you? Come out with your sword, And with a knot. To cut the loose ends, To tighten the knot But all this can happen If its you, Even though I don’t know, Where are you?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/4/2011 8:42:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry.. enjoy the site as u share words with luv..
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Neha Khanna
Date: 6/5/2011 10:32:00 AM
thank you very much..:):)
Date: 6/4/2011 2:20:00 PM
Creative and very impressive expressions you have penned so well, cuto
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Neha Khanna
Date: 6/5/2011 10:35:00 AM
thank you sir for your encouraging words
Date: 6/4/2011 9:11:00 AM
reaaallllyyyyy niceee 1111111111111.................
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Neha Khanna
Date: 6/5/2011 10:37:00 AM
thank u
Date: 6/4/2011 5:39:00 AM
Welcome Cuto thoughtful poem, last stanza is my favourite . Anne
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Neha Khanna
Date: 6/5/2011 10:37:00 AM
thanks anne
Date: 6/4/2011 5:12:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Cuto. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Neha Khanna
Date: 6/5/2011 10:37:00 AM
thanks carl..:):0)

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