Where Are We Going Today

Alone in blissful radiance
Awakened inner sentience
Feels the bliss current
Ascending a steep gradient
As we observe
Without reserve
Our trust childlike
Allowing the bliss spike
A natural miracle
Water seeking its own level

Within

21-August-2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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January 15, 2021 at 9:25 AM
Rob! My! My! 19 comments in 11 minutes. A record of sorts! What do you wish to know from me? :)
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January 15, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Im not much into this lord guy myself, but well written.
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January 15, 2021 at 8:20 AM
Didn't think a poem could be about food.
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January 15, 2021 at 8:19 AM
Enjoyed this write.
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January 15, 2021 at 8:19 AM
Shared the blessing.
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January 15, 2021 at 8:18 AM
Enjoyed this write.
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January 15, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Enjoyed this write.
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January 15, 2021 at 8:17 AM
I don't understand.
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January 15, 2021 at 8:16 AM
Yup another acrostic read.
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January 15, 2021 at 8:15 AM
This is pretty damned good.
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January 15, 2021 at 8:15 AM
Enjoyed this write.
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January 15, 2021 at 8:14 AM
What a terrible injustice!
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January 15, 2021 at 8:13 AM
I don't understand.
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January 15, 2021 at 8:12 AM
Enjoyed this write.
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January 15, 2021 at 8:12 AM
Enjoyed this write.
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January 15, 2021 at 8:12 AM
I was confused by "it sing and ping."
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January 15, 2021 at 8:11 AM
Would love to have you review my work since I always seem to be reviewing yours.
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January 15, 2021 at 8:10 AM
I really enjoyed this poem.
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January 15, 2021 at 8:10 AM
Enjoyed this write.
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January 15, 2021 at 8:09 AM
Enjoyed this write.
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