Where Angels Fly (Haiku)

The sunset colours
a vast view of the heavens,
where evening clouds fly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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November 13, 2008 at 11:10 AM
Waht a beautiful vision captured in just three lines. The second line is my favorite. This poem has such a peaceful feel to it. Thank you for sharing it with us and for taking time to comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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August 26, 2008 at 5:15 AM
This is in perfect form and it provides such lovely imagery for the reader. I love the title of this. Have a great day. Michael
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August 24, 2008 at 8:12 PM
Beautiful short poem. And you stuck to 5-7-5. Well done! Peace Matthew Anish
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August 23, 2008 at 1:26 PM
Just lovely great imagery! Laura
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August 22, 2008 at 4:21 PM
This brings to mind so many beautiful sunsets. Lovely atmosphere and very vivid. Well done. Love Heidie
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August 22, 2008 at 9:54 AM
Adell I just loved this poem - very blessed like the poetess who wrote it
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August 21, 2008 at 2:23 PM
it is beauitful i really joy to read
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August 21, 2008 at 12:43 PM
a very beautiful Haiku. enjoyed it. thank you for reading my another solider fell today and for your comment
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August 21, 2008 at 7:19 AM
An inspiring vision! Beautiful haiku. Love, Shar
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August 21, 2008 at 6:10 AM
What a lovely picture you painted!....Blessings....Carrie
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