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Where Am I and Where Is She

Where am i and where is she Life's back on the way But where is me? Staring by the shore Flowing by the bank Still i question Whom should i thank For the life and things bright Though been always told Though being always hold But neither is she Then nor I And the dreams in the eyes Away it flies Left in the eyes are watery tides Left in my heart are painful bites My heart on the left Beats to the depth As if it felt Is tied By a belt And waiting on the way Where i am and Where She is! Knocking her door till the heart vibes Waiting for a dawn which alive my skies......

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Date: 12/31/2013 2:50:00 PM
THE,WHERE AND I AND WHERE IS SHE
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Benu P Guragain
Date: 1/2/2014 2:45:00 AM
oh yes... Thanks for correction..
Date: 12/31/2013 2:48:00 PM
its like you made a mistake in the first line of this poem.Aniways welcome to p soup,merry christmas
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Date: 12/26/2013 12:51:00 AM
Benup,, Hope you are enjoying the holidays, -- Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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Benu P Guragain
Date: 12/26/2013 9:37:00 AM
Thanks SKAT. I am just a simple person with very simple thoughts. I wrote some poems a few years back and those are which i have started posting. Thanks for accepting me as a friend. Hope you too are enjoying holidays. ^_^
Date: 12/23/2013 4:12:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Benup ! - Nice to read your first poem here. :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - I wish you and your loved ones an enjoyable Christmas - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Benu P Guragain
Date: 12/23/2013 5:42:00 AM
Thanks Anne... Merry Christmas
Date: 12/23/2013 1:42:00 AM
a very deep and awesome ending, Benup, ,A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Benu P Guragain
Date: 12/23/2013 5:46:00 AM
Thanks Linda... Merry Christmas..

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