Where Am I and Where Is She

Where am i and where is she
Life's back on the way
But where is me?
Staring by the shore
Flowing by the bank
Still i question
Whom should i thank
For the life and things bright
Though been always told
Though being always hold
But neither is she
Then nor I
And the dreams in the eyes
Away it flies
Left in the eyes are watery tides
Left in my heart are painful bites
My heart on the left
Beats to the depth
As if it felt
Is tied By a belt
And waiting on the way
Where i am and Where She is!
Knocking her door till the heart vibes
Waiting for a dawn which alive my skies......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Eseke Avatar
December 31, 2013 at 2:50 PM
THE,WHERE AND I AND WHERE IS SHE
Guragain Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 2:45 AM
oh yes... Thanks for correction..
Eseke Avatar
December 31, 2013 at 2:48 PM
its like you made a mistake in the first line of this poem.Aniways welcome to p soup,merry christmas
A  Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 12:51 AM
Benup,, Hope you are enjoying the holidays, -- Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
Guragain Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 9:37 AM
Thanks SKAT. I am just a simple person with very simple thoughts. I wrote some poems a few years back and those are which i have started posting. Thanks for accepting me as a friend. Hope you too are enjoying holidays. ^_^
Andresen Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 4:12 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Benup ! - Nice to read your first poem here. :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - I wish you and your loved ones an enjoyable Christmas - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Guragain Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 5:42 AM
Thanks Anne... Merry Christmas
A   Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 1:42 AM
a very deep and awesome ending, Benup, ,A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Guragain Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 5:46 AM
Thanks Linda... Merry Christmas..
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