When You'Re Gone

Lack of your presence leaves me dying gradually like a wilting flower
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Pyro Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 7:47 PM
Thank you Sue Palli for sweet remarks, I'm deeply honored.
Pyro Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 7:46 PM
Thank you Carol and Jared for your words of encouragement, I am wholeheartedly honored.
Pickett Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 8:38 AM
You painted the image of a depressing loss well my friend... Good work....:JP]
Brown Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 8:14 AM
Very interesting poetry today Johnny. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
Palli Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 12:29 AM
so sad
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