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When Your World Falls Apart

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What do you do, when your world falls apart? 
What do you do? when somebody breaks your heart, 
You want for all the gray clouds to part 
And to bring in your world only sunshine 

What do you do, when your world falls apart? 
And nothing in your life seems to go for you right, 
But in the darkest moments of your life, you still fight to survive, 
For all that you hold dear, and you believe deep in your heart. 

What do you do, when your world falls apart? 
And you sit there alone in the dark, and you cry only to God. 
What to do when your heart is just bleeding, from too many wounds, 
That have been inflicted on you, and makes you only just fall apart. 

What do you do, when your world starts falling apart? 
I would say to you my friend just to get up fast and make a new start, 
Get in touch with yourself as fast as you can leave your past behind 
And always  remember, that tomorrow it's another day! 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2014 


November,20,2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Roper Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 7:02 PM
True wisdom, Dorian, beautiful write :) blessings eve
Allison Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 6:09 PM
Wise words indeed Dorian - love the power of the repeated lines:-)Its a 7 from me hugs jan xx
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