When Your Around X

Longingly waiting for your embrace
Over and over my mind will race
Vast and strong my heart shall pound
Every time when your around.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 19, 2009 at 6:43 AM
You have said a lot in these four lines of rhyming couplets. Oh how love reaches within us. Nice poem. Keep writing. God Bless you and welcome to Poetry soup. Love, Dane
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