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When You Walked Into My Life

When you walked into my life And knocked on my heart's door, I never dreamed you held the key To a world of love and more. And once that you stepped in, how was I to know you'd decorate my life with love and make my heart you home. When I see your smile, there's a view of all my dreams, all my hopes and wishes and a love for eternity. When you put your arms around me, I've never felt so much, until the day I found you, I never knew real love. I'll stand beside you always and give you all my love. I could never leave you, even when the times are tough. To only you I'll make this promise And know you can always believe, that for as long as I live, You'll be all I need. Written by: Devin Michaels-Bishop Published on Amazon: My Inner Dreams

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Date: 5/26/2017 2:44:00 PM
What a beautifully romantic piece! Everyone wants to love and be loved and you nailed this one! Thanks for sharing this loving feeling with us! Best wishes. Pandita
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Date: 3/23/2017 11:20:00 AM
I would love to see what the poets on this site think about this poem. Would you make any suggestions of anything I should change? I'm a new poet and I write as it comes to mind. I'm not ever good at figuring out the types of poems I'm writing, that's why I say that I don't know. I realize that I should probably study how to write different types of poems. To me though, I share it as it comes to mind and heart. Do you think this is a good way to write my poems? Please help with suggestions.
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