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When You Smile

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when you smile... so does my heart! the sun... shines much brighter... and stars in the sky... all align. angels... clap and sing! the sparks... in your eyes... explode, so... never lose your smile... it's indeed your greatest... gift! when you smile, I smile. (yalto) BRIAN'S CHOICE 5,any form,any theme poetry contest (Winner: Honorable Mention) Sponsored by Brian Strand 05/04/2020 "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly Lines 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables Date written: 05/03/2020

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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/4/2020 6:18:00 PM
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Edward, I love your form. There is so much that may be expressed in brief words. This poem is another fine example! Thank you. I have written my first Yalto today! Blessings xxoo
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/4/2020 6:35:00 PM
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Thank you, Connie:-) I'm so glad to see more people try the Yalto form, and excel at it! Can't wait to read yours! Blessings to you, too. xoxo
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John Watt
Date: 5/18/2020 5:41:00 PM
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Edward, I love this poem, it brought a smile. Lovely example for your contest. Love the message in the image as well. Going into my faves... John
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/18/2020 6:08:00 PM
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Thank you so much, John:-) I'm glad you loved it. I greatly appreciate the fav!
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/17/2020 7:18:00 PM
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:) you make me smile with this poem, great example. hugs eve
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/17/2020 7:24:00 PM
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Thank you very much, Eve:-) I'm glad this poem brought a smile to your face!
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/5/2020 11:42:00 AM
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you certainly made me smile Edward!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/5/2020 12:26:00 PM
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I'm glad it did, Jan:-) Stay safe out there, friend!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/3/2020 4:44:00 PM
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Excellent, Edward...message well delivered: when you smile, I smile.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/3/2020 6:56:00 PM
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Thank you very much indeed, Vijay:-) Stay safe out there, my friend!

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