When You Lied Next To Me

as late as it is,
its another beutifull evening,
if it had been like all other days,
you had been lying next to me.

if love is such a mess,
then why make me fall in it,
because i was fine with the friendship we had,
and the times we lied next to the bed

i dont know if my tears have dried,
or is it that the pain has fully died,
because if i recall my best memories,
was the one's you lied next to me.

now am lost in empty thoughts,
i'm finding my way to the top,
and trust me if i ever do,
i will be fine lying with my true boo.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 9/11/2012 2:31:00 AM
wow...thats good
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Sarah Enoch
Date: 9/11/2012 2:47:00 AM
thank you!! Jacob...
Date: 9/10/2012 1:08:00 PM
Sarah , congratulation with your awesome featured poem of the week... brightened my day...pd
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Sarah Enoch
Date: 9/10/2012 9:37:00 PM
they delayed sending me the notice...thank you again dear...
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Sarah Enoch
Date: 9/10/2012 1:42:00 PM
wait....featured poem of the week?? how?...am sort of new...can you help me understand that...
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Date: 9/10/2012 1:38:00 PM
thank yu so much!! that means alot coming from you 'poet destroyer......thanx again and i love your poems alot...
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