Pam Deremer Poet I do not know?

When You Left

When you left you took my heart,
and life as I knew it just fell apart.
The days they come and go so fast,
they march right on...how will I last?
Take each day...first one...then two,
this is what I was told to do.
It will get better my friends they say,
I wonder when...it's not today.
For when you left...I gave up hope.
For others sake...I try and cope.
They didn't know you this I feel,
I hardly believe that this is real.
Wake me up for surly I'm dreaming,
those nights alone I wake up screaming.
Too much to bare...too much I say,
since the day you went away.
If you are truly up above,
I send you dear...my deepest love.
                                                       P.R. Deremer

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Regina Mcintosh December 13, 2022 at 3:33 AM Brilliant. Just love this. So beautiful. God bless you. Love, Gina

Paul Callus August 6, 2015 at 2:34 PM Very emotive, heartfelt poem. One never forgets, but let the remembrance be a special one built on love. // paul Pam Deremer August 6, 2015 at 2:46 PM Yes! Thank you.

Tu Tran July 21, 2015 at 1:35 PM I CAN SEE THAT YOU WRITE FROM THE HEART. YES, YOUR BABY IS UP ABOVE LOVING YOU!

Yolanda Scott July 16, 2015 at 9:00 PM Beautiful poetry. I feel your loss. I hope each day gets a little better. Keep writing. God bless you!!!