Zhino Qadr Poet I do not know?

When You Left!

Why you let me to fall in your love 
If you knew that one day you will leave me
You didn't  knew that you will take my spring with you
when you left, you made my heart lonesome 
You left  big pain on my heart
Your memory is stay with me 
I still remember of you 
Your remembrance is giving live to my life 
You're so sweet in my memorial  
Life is nice and pretty with you
When you leave! What happen to me? 
Love is playing his play with me

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Beata Agustin October 14, 2024 at 7:41 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 18, 2016 at 11:17 AM ZHINO, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A December 5, 2015 at 7:43 PM Zhino, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**

Dave Timperley June 4, 2013 at 4:08 AM Oh the pain of loves separation. I think most of us has been through it at some time. I hope you found another. God Bless. Dave.

Nadia Shahwan June 9, 2009 at 8:10 AM Ryhming stanza.