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When You Felt Alone

There was a time you felt alone, A time you thought the world had ended and nobody will find you A time when the dark cloud had fallen to your head and no light could illuminate your path, When the rivers over flowed their banks and ruptured that cute smile of yours and left you wry for a moment You prayed for better days with a bitter voice Hoping to see light when all that appeared was a blurred void For a moment there was silence during your presence Your heart stopped from thudding like a gong Your tears stuck on replay like a song Nobody could see what you where going thru due to failure of realizing a wrong Death being your obsession You surely felt no happiness for a while in your possession As feeling alone was one of your greatest depressions 'Harsh the pain' your mind could say but your heart couldn't heal from that severe collapse You needed someone to give you props Someone to caresses u, and someone to wipe your tear drops Someone who won't point out at your wrongs, but try to correct your faults Someone who would say, 'thru thick and thin I will be there for you till your heartache stops' But all you had was a memory A memory that linked you to the past The past when your world had ended How it ended something you never wanted to remember A remembrance that made u feel alone Alone because of loosing yourself to the world The world that brought misery to your life A life that was better with no love

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Date: 4/28/2013 5:35:00 PM
Andy, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**
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Date: 3/31/2013 5:52:00 PM
I can tell you put your heart in this poem. That is a really personal thing and I think It's awesome that you can correlate.
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Andy Dube
Date: 4/3/2013 7:05:00 AM
Thank you for the heads up. Please keep me posted on your thoughts regarding my poems. I'm sure i can learn a lot from your feedback
Date: 3/29/2013 5:31:00 PM
This is a great poem. I've felt alone honestly even with friends you can still feel alone sometimes. I have friends though so I don't feel totally alone. I think about 5 or 6 good girlfriends and I cheer up immediately especially when they call or I get a message from one of them then I see them after a long time being busy and not seeing them. I long for love and a relationship with a guy.
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Andy Dube
Date: 4/3/2013 7:09:00 AM
Well i think you need yourself more than you need anybody. First learn to live with yourself before you consider someone in your life. In that way, nothing can ever bring you down

Book: Shattered Sighs