Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Rhyme

When You Are In Love

(Dedicated to a good friend of mine) 


Some many people say that love, 
Can mend a broken heart, 
And too many things I know, 
Are breaking now yours apart 

True love can make you so happy, 
But sometimes, all the opposite of that you know, 
Then love can make you feel so funny and blue, 
That's when all over again your feelings are so low! 

Love can make you or break you, 
Love can be so wonderful, that also it's true, 
There's a big difference between these two, 
True love will never forsake or leave you 

When you feel that love in your heart, you know, 
Make it every part of your life and don't let it go! 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2005-2009 


March,12,2009

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Lena Townsend March 13, 2009 at 7:37 AM This is a really nice poem and written so well. It is very uplifting. I am sure that your friend is honored to have it dedicated to them. Smiles from Lolita