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When You Are In Doubt

Do not speak a word if you doubt there is no shelter for it Do not offer the hand of friendship If you feel the weight of a previous disappointment Do not walk the streets we used to once just to feel The feeling that we abandoned in the loneliness of the first letter Unknown, unprotected Just like the dried branch of a tree When you are in doubt for the one you wait Do not step ahead Do not let the thoughts evolve in vain Because they'll never be calm again….

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Date: 12/14/2023 1:24:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 12/29/2009 2:34:00 PM
great emotions in this poem, again welcome to poetry soup!
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Date: 12/29/2009 9:40:00 AM
Interesting and profound. Very enjoyable read. Welcome to poetry soup, may you enjoy each moment in our friendship, and may your talent inspire us, as much as any may inspire you. One love.
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