Notes About The Poem

written in fourteen syllable counts to highlight the day 

couplets to draw a union of two hearts crowning from the salt 

where a valentines tiara is bestowed diamond cut deeply 

 

wishing everyone much blessed happiness this day 

 

When You Appear Clouds Disappear Cotton Lining Apex

Silver dewdrops sparkle deeply under a footprint held 
salted remains forever and always loving dearest 

Through the living waters of life's rainbows kiss sweetly love
every colour shines uniquely precious under the mist 

Golden beautiful your sunlight guides me home warmly beams 
standing time adoring graciously your crown circles gems

A halo begins to turn waves around undercurrents 
into the liquid oceans salt where you are born with wings 

On the seventh crest drunken spirit of eternity 
under the influence of your soul heartbeats jump over 

And back moonshines softly breathless gently sighs out angel 
whitewashed purity rolling a carpet before you

Kissing the soles of every step forward destiny calls 
echoing  within four chambers a song for you sings blue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Trifiatis Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 1:25 AM
We have to follow your footprints of writing love poems my dear friend, Liam! A huge seven. Happy Valentine's my friend!
Petersen Potter Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 9:04 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Smith Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 8:39 PM
Liam, I am a huge fan but I have to admit to being lost in drunken spirit. That could be my problem...
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