When You Appear Clouds Disappear Cotton Lining Apex

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written in fourteen syllable counts to highlight the day

couplets to draw a union of two hearts crowning from the salt

where a valentines tiara is bestowed diamond cut deeply

wishing everyone much blessed happiness this day

Silver dewdrops sparkle deeply under a footprint held salted remains forever and always loving dearest Through the living waters of life's rainbows kiss sweetly love every colour shines uniquely precious under the mist Golden beautiful your sunlight guides me home warmly beams standing time adoring graciously your crown circles gems A halo begins to turn waves around undercurrents into the liquid oceans salt where you are born with wings On the seventh crest drunken spirit of eternity under the influence of your soul heartbeats jump over And back moonshines softly breathless gently sighs out angel whitewashed purity rolling a carpet before you Kissing the soles of every step forward destiny calls echoing within four chambers a song for you sings blue

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/14/2017 1:25:00 AM

We have to follow your footprints of writing love poems my dear friend, Liam! A huge seven. Happy Valentine's my friend!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/13/2017 9:04:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/13/2017 8:39:00 PM

Liam, I am a huge fan but I have to admit to being lost in drunken spirit. That could be my problem...