When You

When you lay eyes on me, I just wanna put them to sleep
Vision cost a lot, but I create it cheap
No matter what you do, when you do something, I like… it
Since love is like survivor, I won’t… quit

When you smile at me, you pump my heart
While pumping hard, flowing off the chart
You’re my master piece, that’s why you’re state of the art
I’ve loved you ever since we made a start

When you kiss me, its breath taking
Don’t kill me now, because our love is waking
Young we did, and young are we
But I feel so grateful when you love me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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