When Wishes Come True

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April 8, 2025, entered in Constance LaFrance's Write Ten Beautiful Lines Contest

 
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A Mom and Dad who'd drifted far apart 
walked by their little daughter's room one night 
and heard, "I'm hurting right here in my heart! 
I wish," she told her dolls, "they wouldn't fight 
and be mean to each other. It's not right!" 

Before too long those parents, who had prayed, 
stood holding hands outside their daughter's door. 
They heard, "Oh, dollies, Mom and Dad have made 
me happy. They're not fighting anymore. 
My wishing made them sweeter than before."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 4/13/2025 8:21:00 PM
clever girl she is. nice narration. Congratulations on your win dear poet.Cheers!!!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/19/2025 5:48:00 AM
Thanks so much, Thriveni. Janice
Date: 4/13/2025 9:59:00 AM
- A reality for many children... hearing their parents argue... her dream came true, Janice :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/19/2025 5:48:00 AM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Janice
Date: 4/13/2025 8:47:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely/wonderful write again. A wonderful story. Have a blessed day with your win...................
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/19/2025 5:47:00 AM
Thanks so much, Paula. Janice
Date: 4/9/2025 1:16:00 PM
What a Lovely write you have here. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a wonderful spring day.........
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/10/2025 5:54:00 AM
Thanks so much, Paula. You too! Janice
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