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When Will It End

When will it end The hurt, the pain Physically keeping yourself stronger Mentally breaking down As the crimson river starts Starts flowing with no way to stop Draining into a puddle of Lonliness, hate and envy How could life stop here No way, no where to turn Digging a hole deeper Into the mist of society When will it end

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Date: 12/23/2011 10:52:00 PM
Wow, I am extremely impressed by this, and really feel that I can relate. You articulated my (though probably also your) thoughts in an incredibly clear manner, and I was very moved. Good Job!
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