When Will It End

When will it end
The hurt, the pain
Physically keeping yourself stronger
Mentally breaking down
As the crimson river starts
Starts flowing with no way to stop
Draining into a puddle of
Lonliness, hate and envy
How could life stop here
No way, no where to turn
Digging a hole deeper 
Into the mist of society
When will it end
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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December 23, 2011 at 10:52 PM
Wow, I am extremely impressed by this, and really feel that I can relate. You articulated my (though probably also your) thoughts in an incredibly clear manner, and I was very moved. Good Job!
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