When We Take Our Vows

" When We Take Our Vows "

Baby, hold onto me
whatever will be will be
the future is ours to see
W
H
E
N
you hold onto me.

Never going to let you go
I love you don’t you know
our love blossomed to grow
W
E
won’t ever let go.

Cherish what I give to you
loving you I was born to do
together our love is true
T
A
K
E
my love for you.

This love we share is strong
it can never ever go wrong
we have both waited so long
O
U
R
love is so strong.

Baby, hold onto me
forever, we will be
future, ours to see
V
O
W
S
eternity, you and me...

Penned By MPK

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 3/9/2009 11:44:00 PM
Vows are taken far too lightly these days, I wish my husband had taken his vows as seriously as you did maybe I wouldn't be divorcing him. God should make more men like you. Your heart seems to be so pure and true, God blessed us all with a man like you. XOXOXO Aleera
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Date: 7/12/2008 2:54:00 PM
Great write and sounds like a song to me...Just take those vows seriously. Great write.
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Date: 7/12/2008 9:26:00 AM
Clever write, and form. Everything in life is better when there is someone special there with you, Always, Christy.....I write songs, and if you ever want to hear any of them just email me, and I will send them on an email ...chardy4904@charter.net...thanks for all your kind comments on my work
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