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When Water Falls

Cascades of teardrops Meandering aimlessly Earth's lamentation

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/16/2014 9:17:00 PM
Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, nikkia
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Date: 5/16/2014 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Lori
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Date: 5/15/2014 9:30:00 PM
Cool way to call the water falls as earth's lamentation. Congrats on the winners' list.
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Date: 5/1/2014 4:43:00 PM
Lovely haiku; love it. // paul
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Nikkia Roberts
Date: 5/2/2014 11:03:00 AM
Thank you, my friend! :-) There's something sad and beautiful about waterfalls to me.

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