When Water Falls

Cascades of teardrops
Meandering aimlessly
Earth's lamentation
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 9:17 PM
Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, nikkia
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 7:55 AM
Congratulations on your win! Lori
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 9:30 PM
Cool way to call the water falls as earth's lamentation. Congrats on the winners' list.
Callus Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 4:43 PM
Lovely haiku; love it. // paul
Roberts Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 11:03 AM
Thank you, my friend! :-) There's something sad and beautiful about waterfalls to me.
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