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When Violins Weep

such longing, such loving
sweet violins sing
where have you gone?
my true love, my light
violins ~ cry
my soul to sleep
forever in memories
my broken heart weeps

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/9/2009 10:40:00 AM
this is very sweet..
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Date: 5/7/2009 9:03:00 PM
This is true beauty, here such elegance with sadness. I can hear those strings striking those lonely chords. Masterful Work Aways Jim!
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Date: 4/24/2009 6:09:00 PM
Oh, how sad, my heart weeps with you. Such a beautiful poem Jim! I love this. ~Trudy~
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Date: 4/24/2009 5:47:00 PM
This is awesome! I love it-darkpoet
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Date: 4/23/2009 11:57:00 PM
Reminds me of a Vivaldi concerto Jim.Nice work.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 4/16/2009 10:02:00 AM
pretty, beautiful, really really good! and I like it a lot!
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Date: 4/13/2009 4:57:00 PM
the way love is suppose to sound . jhlovingiii
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Date: 4/12/2009 11:54:00 AM
Many musicians love their instruments, perhaps, you will hear it again? Light & Love
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Date: 4/10/2009 11:52:00 AM
;;;;;;;;;nice;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
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Date: 4/10/2009 10:12:00 AM
A very melodic dirge flavor ... lyrical and sweet
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Date: 4/9/2009 6:33:00 PM
Yes, violins have that sad, beautiful, melancholy sound and I always have a tear when I hear them.. Well done.
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Date: 4/9/2009 2:02:00 PM
Dear Jim, I know exactly How YOU feel this POEM comes from YOUR heart Awesome Write The Heart of a POET series is not a dream ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 4/9/2009 12:54:00 PM
Beautiful reflection on the sad and lonesome cry of the violin. Your message is so clear in each line. My son actually called me to tell me that he has a concert tonight at the highschool as I was reading this... he plays first string in his orchestra, the violin of course. Very cool timing, anyway thought I would share...LOL Great writing! Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/9/2009 12:31:00 PM
Very poignant write here, James. I tried to get serious with this one but all I remember is the screeching sound of violin practice ... LOL ... sorry ...
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Date: 4/8/2009 4:49:00 PM
Nothing can say sad as well as a violin. I prefer the fiddle
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Date: 4/8/2009 4:57:00 AM
Masterfully written I love this pieve
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Date: 4/8/2009 3:38:00 AM
Phenomenal write, so few words to show such emotion and what seems like a heart wrenching time. I loved it though....Aleera
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Date: 4/7/2009 6:22:00 PM
There is nothing wuite like the internal sounds of the violin. it can set a singing heart alight and dancing; feeling more than anything else. amazing. love, Kristin
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Date: 4/7/2009 6:12:00 PM
Ditto-wink-A.A.
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Date: 4/7/2009 5:29:00 PM
Extremely emotional, sweet, sad and beautiful exactly like the sound of violins. Breathtaking poetry. So sorry I am having trouble keeping up with my comments. Thank you so much for yours. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/7/2009 4:41:00 PM
You express the pain of loss so beautifully, James. Violins do, indeed, seem to weep in a sad symphony of the heart. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/7/2009 3:43:00 PM
Sonatas by Bach, nothing more soothing in my opinion, Don't know if it will mend but it can't hurt. You write well my friend. Thanks for the commentary it is most appriciated, -Always Alexandra
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Date: 4/7/2009 1:29:00 PM
Nice sad tone, I like the feel of it...I left you some soup mail...Raul
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Date: 4/7/2009 12:54:00 PM
this is sweet and so sad,it make us wanna reach out for your cry,broken heart weeps,i love the way you write and cheer up;-)
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Date: 4/7/2009 8:54:00 AM
A wistful love poem Jim that touches hear strings nd reminds me of Vivaldi.One for my favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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