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When Time Stands Still

I like it when the sky is going grey.
The treetops underneath seem surreal,
and looking from upon the hill, 
across vacant parking lots, 
through chattering leaves on limbs,
and far into the fall horizon,
I seem to see that time stands still.

The wheezing breath of motionless colors,
which, for a moment, almost fade away -
so soft, yet silence speaks to me in whispers.
The grass on the ground begins to sway,
and leaves are swirling everywhere,
falling from branches on tired trees,
then raptured into the glorious breeze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hallett Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 7:50 AM
Good job!! I felt like I could see what you are talking about! Keep writing!! I can't wait to read more!!! -Courtney-
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March 17, 2010 at 12:39 PM
Intense write Chad and a great unique title to draw the reader into your poignant lines.. thankxxx for your warm and special comments on my poetry today also..keep up the terrific work and stay in touch..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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