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When Things Go Wrong

I'd always blame my mother My father, sister, or brother Yet when I finally looked in the mirror, I saw my own face; there was no other!

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Date: 3/26/2021 5:10:00 AM
Yup...that is being grown up.
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Date: 2/12/2018 7:46:00 AM
Succinct poem and to the point. Very good, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/12/2018 1:12:00 PM
Yup. The mirror doesn't lie, and the truth hurts. ---Except I see nothing but friendship and goodwill in your mirror. And that's the truth! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 12/30/2017 9:30:00 PM
So true! Eventually we must face the truth.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/31/2017 8:46:00 PM
Thanks so much! I just love to write!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/30/2017 10:00:00 PM
Thanks for the encouragement!...I've been looking over some of your December poems. How do you produce so much?! ---Impressive! ---gw
Date: 12/29/2017 2:14:00 PM
A didactic... nice one...
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