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When There's No Man

She must be so happy To have her be called lucky That she has found her one and only Someone who can make her lively To life, she was once bitter Thought she could never have someone better She really never believed in forever Not until she found someone who can love her On their 100th day She came all the way With her man by the bay There on the sand they lay But as the days came by Loud shouts replaced sweet lullabies Every night she cries Asking God lots of "whys" Then she realized, she needs no man She'll be very happy even if there's no one Walking alone by the park happily On her way to her friends who can keep her company

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/26/2015 10:18:00 PM
Hi Trisha, i like the comfort of being without a man at times:), A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Trisha Kaye Jongo
Date: 7/27/2015 12:27:00 AM
Thank you very much Linda. I really feel so appreciated :")
Date: 7/26/2015 9:12:00 AM
Trisha, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Trisha Kaye Jongo
Date: 7/26/2015 9:16:00 AM
Thank u very much Skat :) I really appreciate you. As a newbie, I don't know what to do. Anyways, hello :")
Date: 7/26/2015 9:01:00 AM
I kinda had a typo. And x grammar. Please bear. This is my first time :)
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