Bryn Strudwick Poet Rhyme

When Then

WHEN THEN

When I was young I knew what I would be;
A super star of sports field or the screen.
Then I grew old and fame eluded me.
But still I dream about what might have been


13th January 2020
When and Then contest
Sponsor - Jenesh Somadas

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Andrea Dietrich January 23, 2020 at 8:18 PM yeah, our dreams sure do crumble as we get older and older. I like this. Congrats for the win

Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2020 at 1:32 PM - Congratulations on your win, Bryn - // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas January 23, 2020 at 6:39 AM Ambitions changes as life flows.. Some may come true, others not.. But still our dreams continues.. Congrats on your winning poem and thanks for participating in the contest.

Line Gauthier January 13, 2020 at 10:07 AM Enjoyed your poem, Bryn.