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When the Smoke Clears

War creates true pain
The clanging of gunshots
Silence thereafter...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A  Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 11:15 PM
like the first two lines. SKAT
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April 19, 2016 at 6:45 PM
Hey this was great i really enjoyed it :-)
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April 18, 2016 at 10:23 PM
Excellent senyru Jaquay.
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April 18, 2016 at 10:19 PM
Good senryu...Jaquay...linda
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