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Another poem turned into a song. Music by Suno (C). lyrics by Artimus - Susan Manley (C)

 

 

 

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When the magic spell is broken and the fog begins to lift. And the heat of the day breaks through and clarity is no longer adrift. The damp quickly dries and the light erases doubt. No longer in the comforting mist things are so clear they shout. It takes a while to exit that mist when it's rose colored glasses you wear. And it's grief you experience because even so you still care. So stop and smell the roses, feed the soul, soothe the heart. A new day has dawned and with it a new start. You never planned for this day, that love could go away You never planned for this day, that love could die on on the vine You never planned for this day, that love could be temporal because in your heart your love was divine When the magic spell is broken and the fog begins to lift. And the heat of the day breaks through and clarity is no longer adrift. The damp quickly dries and the light erases doubt. No longer in the comforting mist things are so clear they shout. It takes a while to exit that mist when it's rose colored glasses you wear. And it's grief you experience because even so you still care. And so you turn your face to the shining sun and let it evaporate those tears that rain down You never planned for this day, that love could go away You never planned for this day, that love could die on on the vine You never planned for this day, that love could be temporal because in your heart your love was divine

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Date: 6/27/2024 7:35:00 AM
You have a real talent, dear poet, dear singer, a rich vibrant emotional expression of sadness, filled with the wisdom to overcome...Frederic
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Susan Manley
Date: 6/27/2024 7:44:00 AM
Thank you Frederic! Its an AI singing the song. But it is my lyrics from my poem. And I am overjoyed to share it in this form! - Susan
Date: 6/25/2024 8:11:00 PM
Dear Susan, your heartbreak-lyric is beautifully sad and expressive. The melody weaves with your words perfectly and I enjoyed the word pairing "exit/mist", it really caught my ear! Your song is evocative and emotive with a melody that's now stuck in my head :) Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Susan Manley
Date: 6/26/2024 3:07:00 PM
Thanks Susan!, Its a poem I wrote a while ago and is popular and I just added some refrains to make a song. Many of my poems ring out like this in my head. Its amazing to publish them as songs too.
Date: 6/25/2024 4:58:00 PM
Wow! That was amazing. What a difference hearing this poem as a song. You have a sweet voice. Thanks for sharing. Truely a wonderful experience.
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Benjamin Bartley
Date: 6/30/2024 10:30:00 AM
Amazing. I did not know AI could be used in such a way. It's a brave new world. Thanks for letting me know. Still, a wonderful song!
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Susan Manley
Date: 6/25/2024 5:57:00 PM
Hi Benjamin, Thanks, that's not my voice ( though I do sing on another song I released here. ) That is an AI voice . But yes, a song sung as opposed to read is more powerful.

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