When the Lights Go Out in Georgia

scant moon -
lullaby’s a whisper.
sleeps soon,
after mother’s kissed her.

moon high,
over dusk-hue passion.
I sigh
with twilight’s compassion.

peeking
between the pines, her eyes
streaking.
winsome drive  - crescent dives.

descent,
of what’s left, of the moon.
advent
of season, coming soon.

Christmas,
aft will bring a moon, black.
snow sass
in cul de sac.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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December 7, 2024 at 7:18 AM
Hi Kim, your 5 stanzas certainly lit up the lights in Georgia.
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December 7, 2024 at 8:22 AM
Thank you, John!
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December 5, 2024 at 11:04 PM
This is a lovely poem, Kim. I love the pretty image. This is a fave. :)
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December 6, 2024 at 10:34 AM
Thank you, Evelyn!
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December 5, 2024 at 10:22 AM
Well, will we get some snow on this second come around with the nnw,nwn, wnw will chill that we are to be getting tonight? Will it snow farther down this time? Probably not but who knows. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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December 5, 2024 at 7:22 PM
That would be interesting! You never know…
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December 4, 2024 at 10:48 PM
enjoyed the form and images, christmas change every year, thanks poet
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December 5, 2024 at 7:27 PM
I thank you and appreciate you, sweet friend!
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December 4, 2024 at 7:01 PM
It seems like the end of something....or something cornered. Maybe looking back and remembering, and preparing for the season coming...this is a fav for me, and a testament that your words always reach me. <3 hugs
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December 5, 2024 at 7:29 PM
You make my day! Thank you, Paige!
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December 3, 2024 at 9:32 PM
I love the form, rhythm, and words of this Kim, and the title.
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December 4, 2024 at 5:08 AM
Thank you so much :)
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December 3, 2024 at 8:22 PM
Pretty as a picture, Kim. Lullaby, good tidings, and Merry Xmas, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 9:24 PM
All good tidings to you, as well, my friend!
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