B. Maxine Revolution Poet Rhyme

When the Leafs Leave and Lay

I wish I
could hear
the trickles and the
tears from these
leaves till they
lose color.

Loosening, only to
float down or travel
on the sky
expressthe breath of
mother-earth.

Guiding you to their
next rebirth and as
they lay and it feel
its decay trickling
once again.
 
Down swords of green
sinking, linking
against the depth of
ground collided
and bonded.
 
Next, responded
cradling a new
growth.

From then leaves
took an oath to be
patient be
free.

Accept fate, and to
just be..

8/4/14

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Verlena S. Walker August 5, 2014 at 12:14 AM Maxine, leaves virtuously lay in a reincarnation phrase... I admire the cadence, the soul... Done well! Verlena

Justin Bordner August 4, 2014 at 8:40 PM I admire your microcasm of death and rebirth Maxine. " Down swords of green..." great vision! To understand our contribution. J.A.B. B. Maxine Revolution August 5, 2014 at 12:07 AM Glad you enjoyed!!

Sara Kendrick August 4, 2014 at 9:16 AM Interesting work..Being patient isn't so easy for most maybe even leaves..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara B. Maxine Revolution August 5, 2014 at 12:06 AM Thank you Sara :)